We can totally put the flower shop in the bar. Or even shoot it in the office location. I need to flesh it out a little more to make sure it works.
I understand your sense of urgency to film. I can’t wait to see it done, either! But I guarantee you that this extra time (April 3rd at the very latest to turn in the script) will be well worth it. Much stronger script. I think you will be pleased.
I think we both have different perspectives since you have been working on this longer than me. 🙂
Tomorrow I will get to you a finished outline that will go through the entire story. It will be in keeping with much of what we already had and a bit of a departure from the original Othello play (but we were on that road already) but still resonating with it and very obviously tied to it.