We are improving the script based upon feedback we’ve received from a few different sources. The main thing is that “Othello,” who we are now calling “Oscar” has not been an actor, meaning that he hasn’t been reacting instead of acting.
This means a pretty significant overhaul to the script, which will be worth it to improve things.
Some major plot points that we had outlined based on Shakespeare’s play will need to be revised to accommodate for a stronger character.
I’m working on that now and will get that to Jeff this week.